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BIPOC Discount Class + Critique: Too Much Detail, Too Little
Instructor: Allison Alsup
Genre: Narrative
Number of Sessions: 1
Meets: 10 AM – 1:00 PM CT
Dates: Saturday, August 22, 2026
Where: Burnt Canoe Studios (4820 Banks St, New Orleans, LA 70119)
Cost: $85/ $78 early bird until August 10, 2026.
– Two first come discounted spots for BIPOC students at $42.50/ $34 until August 10, 2026.
If there’s one question that perpetually stymies writers it’s this: how much do I need to tell my reader before they get it? It’s a conundrum that applies to every aspect of prose whether describing setting, backstory, or a narrator’s thoughts or feelings. Give readers too few details and they’re grasping at straws to connect to the material. Give too much and the narrative drags, leaving the audience feeling pandered to.
While no one answer will satisfy everyone, thoughtful, engaged readers tend to appreciate a sweet spot of effective detail, one that neither overexplains nor leaves them in the dark. In this hands-on workshop, we’ll engage in multiple custom exercises, built from scratch and designed to test for that happy medium. We’ll gather as both writers and the kinds of readers we write for–sharing our reactions and insights with a common goal of coming to a place of confidence in our work’s ability to convey its intentions. Short excerpts from notable writers will add to our understanding of key concepts, such as trusting one’s reader, one’s own voice, when “telling” isn’t such a bad idea, and what finding the right detail really means.
This is an all-levels craft workshop designed to benefit both beginning and experienced prose writers alike.
Optional critique add on: Put your skills to the test and receive written feedback from your instructor on a passage of your writing, with a specific focus on its use of effective detail. 2000 words max. to be submitted via email within one week after the workshop.
Original price was: $102.50.$94.00Current price is: $94.00.
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